Immortal Spirtit(Bleached Immortal)

I guess Alsiel will the comic relief of the group?! I like him already! I like his humor and I kinda imagine his appearance similar to Phileo.

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Intersting MC power idea, but a SEVERE lack of creativity here. It only took me about half a chapter to figure out the "Japanese Cartoon" this series is based off. and the similarities do not end but instead increase. If you're going to base your world off a pre-existing fictional world you need to put your own unique twist to it, and I'm sorry to say that is completely absent here.

After a while, Allen finally managed to hit all of their dantian as he continued to swept once again. He deactivated Low Engage as he looked at the people fall to the ground, writhing in pain.

Marissa: " ya sure whatever"  ( kissing her boyfriend)

"Oh. I will give it to you in a few days. I promise."

Thanks for the Chap! Author-sanCan't wait for the next one :)

My finger finally felt the feeling of being surrounded by warmth, an unprecedented feeling. I almost came, luckily I managed to resist.